TOEFL type 1 #3. Describe a place you like to go to spend time with your friends.
I like the nothern part of Seoul. Seoul has been a capital city for more than six hundred years from Chosun dynasty and now it became a megalopolis. The nothern part of Seoul was originally the center of the capital of the old dynasty, so there are lots of historical places in that nothern district such as Kwangwhamun and Samchungdong area. Moreover, the shape of the city, for example, the irregular roads, traditional buildings and small local shops are very attractive. Also there are a lot of galleries and museums which has variety of collections in all seasons. So when I visit there with friends, we not only spend money to get along with but also gain great culture. That's why I like visiting the nothern part of Seoul.
Hi Lynn! This is a good composition. However, there is one correction.
Seoul has been a capital city for more than six hundred years from Chosun dynasty and now it became a megalopolis.
=> Seoul has been the capital city for more than six hundred years from Chosun dynasty and now it has become a megalopolis.