hi, Alice./ I`m LISA
I made some sentences, for Toeic test, I want you to help me~~~
Can you tell me these are correct or nor??
These are questions & answer for part 3 , responding to questions.
First
About hair products
Q4. How often do you buy shampoo?
- In my case, I usually buy a shampoo whenever my shampoo runs out of it.
Because my hair is not too long, it takes about three month to use all of it.
Q5. How many brands of shampoo do you have? And why?
- Actually, my hair type is so damaged. so I try to use one brand of shampoo that can protect my hair and can make my hair remain glossy.
Q6. What is the most important thing you consider when choosing a hair product?
- When I choose the hair products, I usually consider many things such as the price, brand, and scent. Among them, my top priority is quality. Because my hair condition is not good.
Since this reason, I tried to find the hair product that had the ingredients to protect my hair texture. After a little fail, I finally found out the perfect hair product for my hair condition. Since then, I`ve used that only one brand of hair product.
Second.
Q4. Where do you usually buy perfume or cologne?
- In my case, I usually buy perfume at the department store around my house.
My mother and I like to wear perfume; we go there to buy some perfume that has good scent very often.
Q5. When and Why do you wear perfume?
- I usually use perfume in the morning, before leaving house.
It makes me feel great and fresh, I use it very often.
Q6. What do you consider in choosing perfume?
- When I buying perfume, I consider many things such as the price, brand, scent.
Among them, my top priority is quality.
Because I have very sensitive skin, so I can`t use low quality of the product.
I usually use perfume to feel great, but if I have some trouble on my skin by using perfume, it can`t make me feel good, even feel me even worse.
So, when I choose the perfume, what I concern about the most is quality.
PS. I really want to get High level of Toeic speaking test on 30th, this month.
If you help me, I would be very very happy~~!!
Hi Lisa!
How's everything? I hope all is well.
Here are the corrections:
First
About hair products
Q4. How often do you buy shampoo?
- In my case, I usually buy shampoo whenever my shampoo runs out.
Because my hair is not too long, it takes about three month to use all of it.
Q5. How many brands of shampoo do you have? And why?
- My hair is so damaged.so I try to use one brand of shampoo that can protect my hair and can make my hair remain shiny.
Q6. What is the most important thing you consider when choosing a hair product?
- When I choose the hair products, I usually consider many things such as the price, brand, and scent. Among them, my top priority is quality. Because my hair condition is not good.
This is my reason so I tried to find the hair product that had the ingredients to protect my hair texture. I failed after a few tries but finally found the perfect hair product for my hair. Since then, I only use that brand.
Q4. Where do you usually buy perfume or cologne?
- In my case, I usually buy perfume at the department store around my house.
My mother and I like to wear perfume. We go there to buy some perfume that has good scent very often.
Q5. When and Why do you wear perfume?
- I usually use perfume in the morning, before leaving house.
It makes me feel great and fresh. I use it very often.
Q6. What do you consider in choosing perfume?
- When I buy perfume, I consider many things such as the price, brand, scent.
Among them, my top priority is quality.
Because I have very sensitive skin, so I can`t use low quality products.
I usually use perfume to feel great, but if I have some troubles on my skin by using perfume, it can`t make me feel good, even worse.
So, when I choose a perfume, what I'm concerned the most is the quality.