Hi~ my name is Hye-Young!
and next week I am going to interview for job.
So plz check my self-introduction:ㅇ
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First of all, I’m very pleased to meet you. my name is hye-young hwang. and I will be graduating from xxx university, majoring is clothing & Textile with a minor in communication. I am applying to the marketing team of your company.
I would like to use this opportunity to describe my potential contribution to your company. Thank you for having me today for this interview.
I am applying for this position because I am vary interested in and skilled at 000 and believe I will be able to contribute to the team and company, and develop myself further through the job too.
I have several strengths.
first, I am great team worker. I work in teams very well.
Hi Hye Young!
I am really sorry that I sent it a bit late.
Hope the corrections I have made are helpful for your interview.
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Let's talk about this. OK? Have a great night!