My daughter graduates from her elementary school today. She showed me her graduation photo elbum yesterday when I just returned home in the evening. If she didn't show me it, I wouldn't know her graduation. Even though I try to pay attention to my children, it used to be next to my company work. I have been even busier since I became a manager in the company. And as my daughters are getting older, they began to spend most their time with their friends, not me. It would be quite natural that they pursue their own world, indepent from their parents. Maybe my role as a father should be changed accordingly as they are getting older. But my love and attention for them wouldn't change forever. Happy Thursday !!
Good day! Thank you for sharing stories about your children. It’s nice to know how much you care for them. It’s very rare for a father to be open about their relationship with their children. It’s usually the mothers that do the sharing. It’s sad to know that you missed your daughter’s graduation and that you’re spending lesser and lesser time with them because of your work but as long as you’re trying your best, things will be okay. The most important thing is to never give up on family.
By the way, I have a few corrections with regards to your letter. I’ll put the corrected version below. Please continue writing to practice your English skills more. Thank you again. Happy Thursday!
My daughter graduates from her elementary school today. She showed me her graduation photo album yesterday when I returned home in the evening. If she didn't show me, I wouldn't have known it was her graduation. Even though I try to pay more attention to my children, I still miss out on their activities. They used to be my priority next to my work. I have been busier since I became a manager in my company. And as my daughters are getting older, they begin to spend most of their time with their friends rather than me. It would be quite natural that they pursue their own world, independent from their parents. Maybe my role as a father should be changed accordingly as they are getting older. But my love and attention for them wouldn't change forever. Happy Thursday!!