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To whom it may concern

To whom it may concern:

I am writing to enquire about your company's purchasing policy on the A product. 

I am writing to inquire (enquire is British. Try to use INQUIRE. We are following American English)  about your company's purchasing policy on the product A

My name is Changmin Shin, working for the company A.

My name is Changmin Shin, working for company A.

Company A is the biggest manufacturer in Asian glass fiber market with the production capacity of more than 1 million tons. 

We ranked #1 player in Asian market last year and we started delivering our product into Europe market at the start of this year. 

We ranked #1 in the Asian market last year and we started delivering our product into the Europe market at the start of this year. 

We sells a range of fiber products in order to meet clients' different needs. 

We sell  a range of fiber products in order to meet clients' different needs. 

We have been successfully supplying our product to global buyers such as X, Y, Z for the last 10 years

And our product are highly esteemed by global buyers that are known as those strict standards. 

And our products are highly esteemed by global buyers that are known for their strict standards. 

We, as a leader of the Asian market, invented O, P, Q, and R for the first time in this industry. 

I would like to get a chance to introduce our products to you. 

If you require any further information, feel free to contact me.

Truly yours,

Changmin Shin

  Hello there Changmin! ^^ Thank you for giving your best in doing this homework.  I will discuss further my corrections during our class. ^^

Don't worry, I will always be here to help you become better in English. We will help each other! ^^

Thessa ^^