First and foremost, I hope that my children will be in good health. I believe physical health is the first condition of happiness because we couldn't do anything unless we are healthy. Secondly, I hope my children will experience a lot of things. I realised that this world is filled with so many interesting things when I grew up. And I regretted that I haven't experienced as much as I could when I was young. However, I will show lots of things to my children. And I will wait for them to show their interests in certain things. And then I will support them if they want to do what they like and are interested in. Thirdly, I hope that my children have warm hearts to respect not only other people but also nature. I am convinced that human beings are created to live with other creatures in harmony. Last but not least, I hope that they believe in God and accept that they can everything in the Lord.
hi stan!
Thanks for your essay. It's such a very honest hope for your children. Your future children are blessed indeed to have
you as their father. I'm certain that they will grow up to be responsible citizen of your country and wonderful children of God because you will be there to guide them.
I just made some few corrections on your essay. Please check them out.
Good day!
ailyn ^^
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1. As I grew up, I realised that this world is filled with so many interesting things.
2. And I regretted that I didn't experience as much as I could when I was young.
3. I will wait for them to show their interests in certain things. (remove 'and')
4. I will support them in doing what they want to do and in doing what they are interested in.
5. I hope that my children will have warm hearts to respect not only other people but also the nature.
6. Last but not the least, I hope that they will believe in God and that they will realiaze that they can do everything in the Lord.