Success in any realm of life comes more often from taking chances or risks than from careful and cautious planning.
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There is some debating that whether people who take chances or risks are more likely to be successful in any area than people who make careful and cautious plans. Some people might say that careful attitude and good planning are important factor for the success because it can save you time and energy. However, I do not agree with this idea because of following reasons.
First, most of things have their right time. In other words, if you are waiting for the time that fully prepared, you might miss the good timing. For example, one of my friends has been working in England since two years ago. Even though his English was not good enough at two years ago, he just moved to English and took an adventure. Finally, he got the job in England and now building his good career. Besides, if he did not take a risk at that time and waited until he was fully prepared, he might not be able to get the chance because the working visa in England has been blocked from a year ago.
Second, many of things in the real world are not predictable. That means, even though we make careful plans, many of those are useless. For instance, I was really good at making plans, however, I could not predict about my future even a year in advance. I believe many of people who love to make plans might have same kinds of problem.
In summary, as far as I know, especially in the real world, careful plan and well prepared state are nearly impossible. Yet, if we are turning to a strategy that taking chance or risk momently, we are more likely to get a succession in our territory.
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Here is it. The RED fonts are the corrected ones.
Success in any realm of life comes more often from taking chances or risks than from careful and cautious planning.
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There is some debating that whether people who take chances or risks are more likely to be successful in any area than people who make careful and cautious plans. Some people might say that careful attitude and good planning are important factor for the success because it can save you time and energy. However, I do not agree with this idea because of following reasons.
> There is some debating [debate] that whether people who take chances or risks are more likely to be successful in any area than people who make careful and cautious plans. Some people might say that careful attitude and good planning are important factor [factors] for the success because it can save you time and energy. However, I do not agree with this idea because of [the] following reasons.
First, most of things have their right time. > First, most things have their right time.
In other words, if you are waiting for the time that fully prepared, you might miss the good timing. > In other words, if you are waiting for the time fully prepared
For example, one of my friends has been working in England since two years ago.
> For example, one of my friends has been working in England two years ago.
Even though his English was not good enough at two years ago, he just moved to English and took an adventure.> Even though his English was not good enough two years ago
Finally, he got the job in England and now building his good career. Besides, if he did not take a risk at that time and waited until he was fully prepared, he might not be able to get the chance because the working visa in England has been blocked from a year ago.> has been blocked a year ago
Second, many of things in the real world are not predictable. > many things
That means, even though we make careful plans, many of those are useless. For instance, I was really good at making plans, however, I could not predict about my future even a year in advance. I believe many of people who love to make plans might have same kinds of problem. >many people
In summary, as far as I know, especially in the real world, careful plan and well prepared state are nearly impossible. >careful planning
Yet, if we are turning to a strategy that taking chance or risk momently, we are more likely to get a succession in our territory. > Yet, if we are turning to a strategy that taking chance or risk momentarily, we are more likely to be successful in our territory.
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