Tell me something about your family members.
There are four people in my family: my mom, my dad, my little sister and me.
When I was growing up, my mother was a stay-at-home mom who looked after me and my sister. However, my mother works for a local library now, sorting books and helping customers find items. She loves this job because she can meet many people. My father works as a engineer now and he has worked all of his life. Ever since I can remember, he’s been very busy at work, and he often comes home late at night. As for my little sister, she’s 21 years old and looks very much like father. She is looking for employment, so she’s studying hard these days for the company entrance exam.
Good morning Raina,
Here's the correction of your writing. I hope to talk with you again. Have a blissful day. :)
There are four people in my family: my mom, my dad, my younger sister and me.
When I was growing up, my mother stayed home and looked after me and my sister. However, my mother works in a local library now,she sorts books and helps the customers or library users to find items. She loves this job because she can meet many people. My father works as an engineer and he has been working all of his life. Ever since I can remember, he’s been very busy at work and he often comes home late at night. As for my younger sister, she’s 21 years old and looks like my father very much. She is looking for an employment these days, so she’s studying hard for the company's initial interview and examination.