Hi jen
I ask you ro read and correct below.
you know I'm teacher. so I have to teach mathmatics and guide my class students.
this year I'm very lucky. because my class students are very kind, helpful, responsible.
but the one of that students are not kind. so i investigate his circumstances and i knew that he have been without mother for 10years.
but i didn't ask him reason, because he was very uncomfortable for that.
art teacher who teach my class said to me that he needs love.
so i treat him with love than scolding. and he is more kinder than before.
but he didn't do that he didn't want like errand. today he denied small working for class. so i scolded him. he was getting angry and said to me very unfriendly.
so i think the way to treat him very well. i write my real mind about treating him at class diary.
tomorrow i wish he said "sorry" to me and smile to me.
Hi there Ms.Nari here's my corrections and suggestions for your composition.
With corrections;
you (A sentence should always start with capital letter) know I'm (please use article here: a) teacher. so I have to teach mathmatics (Be careful with your spelling and proper noun should start with capital letter too) and guide my class (You can omit this) students. this year I'm very lucky.(use proper punctuation marks, better use comma) because my class students are very kind, helpful, responsible. but the one of that (better use: the) students are (these should be in singular form) not kind. so i investigate his (better use: the) circumstances and i knew that he have been without (better say: his mother had passed away) mother for 10years( better say: 10 years ago). but i didn't ask him (use article here) reason, because he was very uncomfortable for that.(better use: with the) art teacher who teach my class(you can end the sentence here.) (Use pronoun here: She[the art teacher]) said (Better use: told) to me that he needs love. so i treat him with love than scolding. and he is more kinder than before. but he didn't do that (additional: because) he didn't want like errand. today he denied small working (better use: works) for class. so i scolded him. he was getting (Be consistent with your tenses: better use got angry) angry and said to (better use: told ) me very unfriendly (additional: words). so i think (additional: of ) the way to treat him very well. i write my real mind (better say: what I feel) about treating him at (use proper preposition: in) class diary. tomorrow i wish he said (better say: will say)"sorry" to me and smile to me.
Final DraftYou know I'm a teacher. So I have to teach Mathematics and guide my students. This year I'm very lucky, because my class students are very kind, helpful, and responsible. But one of the student is not kind. So I investigate about the circumstances and I have found out that his mother had passed away 10 years ago. But I didn't ask him the reason, because he was very uncomfortable with the Art teacher who teaches my class. She told me that she needs love. So I treat him with love and I avoid scolding him. And he is more kind than before. But he didn't do that because he didn't want like errand. Today he denied small works for class. So I scolded him. He got angry and told me very unfriendly words. So I,m thinking of the way to treat him very well. I used to write what I feel about treating him in a Class Diary. Tomorrow I wish he will say "sorry" to me and smile to me.