Unit 1-1: adventure
If I were as brave as to go on any type of adventure, I would go to the Amazon in Brazil. Last year, some documentary about the Amazon was shown on TV. That program name was tears of the Amazon.
There are lots of natural resources in the Amazon and people develop that for their desire. Because of the exploitation, forest of the Amazon is destroyed and people who are living near the Amazon are getting sick. So, I want to go there to take care of them and warn people who are developing the Amazon.
I want to go there to experience the nature of the Amazon. I heard that many types of animals are living near the Amazon River. There is a pink river dolphin (It called Boto.), a jaguar and anaconda, etc. I also want to experience the lifestyle of the Amazonia tribes.
HI Andrea! Here are the corrections:
Last year, some documentary about the Amazon was shown on TV.
Last year, a documentary about the Amazon was shown on TV.
That program name was tears of the Amazon.
The program's title was Tears of the Amazon.
There are lots of natural resources in the Amazon and people develop that for their desire.
There are lots of natural resources in the Amazon and people develop that for their own good/as they desire.
There is a pink river dolphin (It called Boto.),
There is a pink river dolphin (It is called Boto.),
There is a pink river dolphin, which is called Boto,
**Way to go Andrea! Your composition is impressive. There were very few errors and what you want to convey is very clear.