hi, nelda.
To exercise in English composition, I made some english sentences from small part of today's class.
Pleas check my sentences. Thank you.
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Now I’m on my way to somewhere around Kangnam station.
Today, I visited my client’s office for meeting.
When I finished the meeting with my client, it was around 6 PM.
I was too tired and it’s close from my client’s office to my home.
So, I tempted myself not to attend 8 PM English class and go back home earlier than usual and take a rest.
But, I overcome the temptation and I’m on my way to English institute.
I’m proud of myself.
This morning, I participated in training program.
The human resource team of my company provides us various education programs for training employees.
Today they invited famous lecturer specialized in marketing.
The visiting lecturer gave a speech about how to improve our company’s profit and lure new customers.
As I said before, I transferred to another division.
So, these days, I should adopt new circumstance and learn and study about new work.
Therefore I spent the whole afternoon taking the OJT(on-the-job training) program.
I’m a kind of student and other team members are teachers.
Hi Heyden! Congratulations for overcoming your temptation to just go home! Keep on motivating yourself. Here are the corrections on your composition. Most of them are in articles. 'Talk to you later!
Correction:
Now I’m on my way to somewhere around Kangnam station.
= Now I’m on my way to some place around Kangnam station.
Today, I visited my client’s office for meeting.
= Today, I visited my client’s office for a meeting.
I was too tired and it’s close from my client’s office to my home.
= I was too tired and my client's office is close to my home.
This morning, I participated in training program
= This morning, I participated in a training program
The human resource team of my company provides us various education programs for training employees.
= The human resource team of my company provides us various education programs.
= The human resource team of my company provides various education programs for the trainees.
I’m a kind of student and other team members are teachers.
= I’m a kind of student and the other team members are teachers.