hi, nelda.
To exercise in English composition, I made some english sentences from small part of today's class.
Please check my sentences. Thank you.
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- My Korean name is very common female name in Korea.
- when I was in school, there’s always someone have same name as me.
- And it sounds feminine, so when somebody hears my name, easily can guess that I’m a female.
- Therefore, when I was young, I’m a little bit insecure about my name.
- So, When I picked up English name, I chose a neutral name “heyden” suitable for either a man of a woman.
- Ko Eunchan is the name of main character of Korean drama titled “coffee prince”.
- I think Ko Eunchan is a man’s name. When I hear this name, I thought Ko Eunchan is a man.
- Because of that name, I think that the hero in that drama couldn’t notice Ko Eunchan is woman and she is telling a lie.
- I think if the heroine’s name was feminine name, everybody would doubt if Eunchan is male or female and her lies would be quickly discovered.
Corrections:
My Korean name is very common female name in Korea.
= My Korean name is a very common female name in Korea.
when I was in school, there’s always someone have same name as me.
= When I was in school, there’s always someone had the same name as mine.
And it sounds feminine, so when somebody hears my name, easily can guess that I’m a female.
= And it sounds feminine, so when somebody hears my name, he/she can easily guess that I’m a female.
Therefore, when I was young, I’m a little bit insecure about my name.
= Therefore, when I was young, I was a little bit insecure about my name.
So, When I picked up English name, I chose a neutral name “heyden” suitable for either a man of a woman.
= So, When I picked my English name, I chose a neutral name “heyden” which is suitable for either a man of a woman.
Ko Eunchan is the name of main character of Korean drama titled “coffee prince”.
= Ko Eunchan is the name of a main character of Korean drama entitled “coffee prince”.
Because of that name, I think that the hero in that drama couldn’t notice Ko Eunchan is woman and she is telling a lie.
= Because of that name, I think that the hero in that drama didn’t notice Ko Eunchan is a woman and she is telling a lie.