Thank you for crrecting my writing.^^
1. Many tragedy things are happend in North Korea, especially related to violation of the
human right in the prison.
2. The North Korea restricts the each person's freedom severely.
3. If someone try to escape from the North Korea, the others of his family will be carried
out public execution miserably.
4. So we should thank for being born and doing whatever we want to do without any
restriction in the democratic country,such as the South Korea.
Thank you for correcting my writing.^^
1. Many tragedy things are happend in North Korea, especially related to violation of the human right in the prison.
>>Many harmful things happens in North Korea especially when it comes to violation of human rights in the prison.
2. The North Korea restricts the each person's freedom severely.
>>North Korea restricts each others freedom severely.
3. If someone try to escape from the North Korea, the others of his family will be carried out public execution miserably.
>>If someone tries to escape from North Korea,the members of their family will be carried out for public execution.
4. So we should thank for being born and doing whatever we want to do without any
restriction in the democratic country,such as the South Korea.
>>So we should be thankful that we are born here in the democratic country of South Korea,where we can do whatever we want without any restrictions.