Hi! Good evening~!

Would correct my essay that we've talked in class?

I wrote more detail than we talked.

Because, I feet that my speaking skill is as it stand. So I decide reviewing our class hardly through recording file and correcting

So I hope that you correct my sentences if you have a time for me ^^

 

Which is correct sentence?

- The white race recognize that we have same abilities which theirs in all fields. ??

or   - we have same abilities what they have. ??

 

 

 

See you tomorrow morning!