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Freezing temperatures leave our joints and muscles tense and stiff. So we should wear the thick clothes to protect our body. However Winter-wear also tends to be bulkier and harder to move around in.
The ice and snow make the streets and sidewalks very slippery.
For my personal experience I felt my feet slip out from under me and I landed on my butt. Forutnately I was OK but It was humiliating because the entire bus witnessed my fall!
More than anything else we should be cautious about the distortion or strain not to be injured.
Especially when we enjoy the sports in winter. we must take enough pre-excercise.
I hope the freezing winter will pass as soon as possible.
And I recommend you don't visit our country during the winter.
This topic is not familiar to you but it seems to be interesting.
Freezing temperatures leave our joints and muscles tense and stiff so we should wear thick clothes to protect our body. However, winter wear also tends to be bulky which makes it hard to move around.
The melted ice makes the streets and sidewalks very slippery.
In my experience, when I was riding on the bus, I felt that my feet slipped and lost its hold so I landed on my butt. Fortunately, I was ok but it was humiliating because the entire bus witnessed my fall.
More than anything else, we should be cautious not to be injured such as fracture or strain.
Especially when we enjoy some winter sports, we must do some warm-up exercises.
I hope the freezing winter will pass as soon as possible.
Moreover, I don’t recommend you to visit our country during the winter.
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hi joy!
Here's the correction for your first article.
Please use some conjunctions to connect two independent clauses.
You can also use some expressions like 'moreover, in addition to, etc. to start your sentence.
When writing about a certain topic. put together all sentences that have the same idea in one paragraph.
Usually, the first line in the paragraph is the main idea and the supporting ideas follow in the remaining sentences.
There must be a flow in your writing. Each paragraph should be correlated to each other. They should support your main topic which is
about freezing temperatures.
Keep it up! Never give up! kk (".) good night~~