hey.. how is it going ??hahaha
good day sir.. thank you for giving me chance to introduce my self.
my name is hyunuk ko.
when i was young,i was always thinking about being a policeman
so after graduation from high school,i decided to major police science in the university.
also in order to provide for globalization and improve my english skills, i went to australia and the philippines. this experience makes me strength and gives me good influence.
i really wanna be a policeman . sir
in my 20s, im fully pursuing my dream which is to be a police officer in bluehouse
in my 30s, i wanna make my dream come true in bluehouse.
thank you
Good day Sir! First, I want to thank you for giving me a chance to have this interview with you.
My name is Hyunuk Ko.
When I was young, I always thought about being a policeman.
So after graduating from high school, I decided to major in Police Science in the university.
Moreover, in order to prepare for globalization and to improve my English communication skills, I went to Australia and the Philippines to learn English. These experiences made me strong and influenced me a lot.
I really desire to be a policeman.
Now that I'm in my mid-20's, I plan to pursue my dream to be a police officer in the Blue House.
In my 30's, I see myself working in the Blue House as a police officer. I will make this dream come true.
Thank you!
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hi James!
You did well! I just made some few corrections in your sentence structure. You can also add your reasons why you really want to become a police officer. Let's discuss more about this later.
Have a great day ahead of you!