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I love shopping. And I prefer to buy something on the internet.>> check

I bought(have  bought?) there my clothes, books, cosmetics and others.>> "I have bought" is also correct.^^

It's very convenient. And I don't need to go out when I want to stay and take a rest at home.>> You can make these sentences into one sentence.^^

At the on-line shopping mall, for example at my favorite site "G-market", I can find anyting what I want to buy.>> My favorite on-line store is G-market and I can find there anything that I want to buy.

And generally they sell cheaper at there than at off-line shopping center and give me various options.  >> Generally, they sell cheaper items than off-line stores and give me various options.

Moreover, at those shops I don't need to be ashamed even though I didn't buy anything after long time shopping.>> should be "after a long time shopping"

Of course, There are some drawbacks.>> Of course there are some drawbacks.

The most important thing is I can't see the goods before I pay for them.>> check!

I can see any imformation about the things but it is hard to imagine without real.>> I can see every information about the items but it's hard to imagine without seeing them.

Sometimes I got things with terrible quality. >> Sometimes I got things with terrible qualities.

But now I read the valuations of somebody who had bought it already before my purchase, so that probrem is rarely happened.

>> But now I read the valuations of somebody who had bought the item before I purchase it. So the problem rarely happened.

And I should wait for my for several days.>> I should wait for several days.

But I think I addicted to waiting what I bought!>> But I think I'm addicted to waiting what I bought.

Just, I never buy pants and shoes at the on-line shopping-mall.>> I just never bought pants and shoes online.

Because if the size dosen't fit me, I should send them back by mail and wait minimum 2-3 days more.

I love shopping. And I prefer to buy something on the internet.>> check

I bought(have  bought?) there my clothes, books, cosmetics and others.>> "I have bought" is also correct.^^

It's very convenient. And I don't need to go out when I want to stay and take a rest at home.>> You can make these sentences into one sentence.^^

At the on-line shopping mall, for example at my favorite site "G-market", I can find anyting what I want to buy.>> My favorite on-line store is G-market and I can find there anything that I want to buy.

And generally they sell cheaper at there than at off-line shopping center and give me various options.  >> Generally, they sell cheaper items than off-line stores and give me various options.

Moreover, at those shops I don't need to be ashamed even though I didn't buy anything after long time shopping.>> should be "after a long time shopping"

Of course, There are some drawbacks.>> Of course there are some drawbacks.

The most important thing is I can't see the goods before I pay for them.>> check!

I can see any imformation about the things but it is hard to imagine without real.>> I can see every information about the items but it's hard to imagine without seeing them.

Sometimes I got things with terrible quality. >> Sometimes I got things with terrible qualities.

But now I read the valuations of somebody who had bought it already before my purchase, so that probrem is rarely happened.

>> But now I read the valuations of somebody who had bought the item before I purchase it. So the problem rarely happened.

And I should wait for my for several days.>> I should wait for several days.

But I think I addicted to waiting what I bought!>> But I think I'm addicted to waiting what I bought.

Just, I never buy pants and shoes at the on-line shopping-mall.>> I just never bought pants and shoes online.

Because if the size dosen't fit me, I should send them back by mail and wait minimum 2-3 days more.>> Because if the size doesn't fit me, I should send them back by mail and wait for 2-3 days or more.