hi, nelda.
To exercise in English composition, I made some english sentences from small part of today's class.
Pleas check my sentences. Thank you.
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My business was not so bad.
I think that my work was not done very well, but it was all right.
I have hot news.
I transferred to another desk this morning.
From joining my company, I wanted to work on a global scale.
Today, Finally I transferred to the International division after 2 and a half years in domestic division.
But, I’m not sure whether it’s good news or bad news.
I applied for this position in May.
At that time, I had the passion and confidence that I could work very well in overseas and believed myself.
But, at that time, domestic division didn’t agree to my transfer to another division.
As the time to transfer to International division was delayed, my passion and confidence was being shaken.
And after Jakarta mission, I was completely exhausted.
So, now I have a questionmark in my mind.
I doubt whether it was right choice or not even though nobody pushed me to transfer to International division and just I really wanted.
There weren't a lot of errors here. 'Talk to you later!
Corrections:
From joining my company, I wanted to work on a global scale.
= Since joining my company, I have wanted to work on a global scale
At that time, I had the passion and confidence that I could work very well in overseas and believed myself.
= At that time, I had the passion and confidence that I could work very well overseas and that I believed in myself.