Hello, Tina Thank you for having me today for the class. I am sorry that I gonna change my class into diffrent class and diffrent teancher from tomorrow officially. I wanna say again thank you for your deligent attitude for my class so far. However, I am gonna write an short essay that I want you to edit for me for the last. If you willing to do that, I would appreciate it.
I stayed at home whole day yesterday in order to do some housework. Actually, There was a old sofa in my home which is very worn down. so I had to throw away it by myself to make room look better. While I was working on it, I used a hammer, drivers something like tools for seperatation to get out of it outside.
Right after finishing that work, I cleaned inside by using vacuum cleaner and mopping the floor. It looked much better than before there was a sofa in main floor frankly. In fact, I had always been thinking about working on it but I didn't have enought time to do it but finally I have done I was so happy about it. Then, I tried to rearrange the funiture that was in main room without a sofa and make space more beauty and nicely.
It was totally changed. Everying seemd to look better and I was even impressd by myself that I have a talent for cleaning and decoration, which is certainly sure :) Then, I had a big brunch arond lunchtime, which was incredibly delicious that I had ever have, I spent great time with many things yesterday.
I realized that whatever you do or will do, even if it is something small, unimportant thing or it could be something boring that you can't avoid otherwise you gotta do it, once you can focus on it to make it best for you and try to do your best, you would be feel satisfied with your job, or even happy about it. Truly, You may find yoursef positive energy from daily routine by doing so. Once again, We all wanna be happy in our life. if we could change our perspective and mind on things, Our life will sigficantly change in meaningful and delightful way.
Thank you.
Hi, Noah!
It's my pleasure to have you in my class. I truly understand your need to transfer to another class and teacher. I hope you continue to study and practice English. Have a nice day ahead! :)
Thank you.
Teacher Tina
Kindly review my corrections below:
Hello, Tina Thank you for having me today for the class.
Hello, Tina!
Thank you for having me today in class.
I am sorry that I gonna change my class into diffrent class and diffrent teancher from tomorrow officially. - I am sorry that I will change my class to another class and different teacher from tomorrow.
I wanna say again thank you for your deligent attitude for my class so far. - I want to thank you again for your diligent attitude in class so far.
However, I am gonna write an short essay that I want you to edit for me for the last. - However, I'm going to write a short essay that I want you to edit for me for the last time.
If you willing to do that, I would appreciate it. - If you will do it, then I would appreciate it.
I stayed at home whole day yesterday in order to do some housework. - I stayed home the whole day yesterday to do some housework.
Actually, There was a old sofa in my home which is very worn down. so I had to throw away it by myself to make room look better. - I actually had an old sofa at home which was very worn down, so I threw it away by myself to make the room look better.
While I was working on it, I used a hammer, drivers something like tools for seperatation to get out of it outside. - While I was working on it, I used a hammer, drivers and other tools to get it outside.
Right after finishing that work, I cleaned inside by using vacuum cleaner and mopping the floor. It looked much better than before there was a sofa in main floor frankly. - After finishing my work, I cleaned the room by using a vacuum cleaner and a mop. It looked much better than before when there was a sofa in the main floor.
In fact, I had always been thinking about working on it but I didn't have enought time to do it but finally I have done I was so happy about it. Then, I tried to rearrange the funiture that was in main room without a sofa and make space more beauty and nicely. - In fact, I have always thought about working on it, but I didn't have enough time to do it. When I was finally done, I was so happy about it. Then I tried to rearrange the furniture in the main room without a sofa. The room became more spacious and beautiful. I was so happy about it.
It was totally changed.
Everying seemd to look better and I was even impressd by myself that I have a talent for cleaning and decoration, which is certainly sure :) Then, I had a big brunch arond lunchtime, which was incredibly delicious that I had ever have, I spent great time with many things yesterday. - Everything seemed to look better. I was impressed of myself because I have the talent for cleaning and decoration
I realized that whatever you do or will do, even if it is something small, unimportant thing or it could be something boring that you can't avoid otherwise you gotta do it, once you can focus on it to make it best for you and try to do your best, you would be feel satisfied with your job, or even happy about it. - I realized that whatever you do or will do, even if it is something small, unimportant or boring that you can't avoid, but you have to do it. Once you can focus on it, you should try your best . You will be satisfied with your job.
Truly, You may find yoursef positive energy from daily routine by doing so. - You may truly find a positive energy in dong your daily routine.
Once again, We all wanna be happy in our life. if we could change our perspective and mind on things, Our life will sigficantly change in meaningful and delightful way. - Moreover, we all want to be happy in our life. If we could change our perspective on many things, our life will significantly change in a meaningful and delightful way.
Thank you.