1. Today I was trying to figure out how I was going to tidy up my boys' room when I got a call from Mom that made me rethink my plan.
2. Today I was trying to figure out the fastest way to Sangseop's restaurant for our old classmate's gathering when I got a call from my wife D had a high fever that made me rethink my plan.
3. Every weekand all my boys want to do is to play games on my Ipad.
4. All I want to do now is soak my body in a hot tube.
5. The unexpected nephew totally foiled my plan to go to a library and read books.
6. Too much drinking last night foiled my plan to take my boys to the zoo, so they walked out of my room, disappointed. One way popped into my head. I took my boys out to get some icecream. As they were having icecreames and potato chips, big smiles spread across their faces.
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Here are the corrections for the following sentences:
1. Today, I was trying to figure out how I was going to tidy up my boys' room; when I got a call from Mom that made me rethink my plan. (Correct, but you have to use the right punctuation.)
2. Today, I was trying to figure out the fastest way to Sangseop's restaurant for our old classmate's gathering when I got a call from my wife. D had a high fever that made me
rethinkchange my plan.3. Every
weekandweekend all my boys want to do is to play games on my Ipad.4. All I want to do now is soak my body in a hot tube. (correct)
5. The unexpected visit of my nephew totally foiled my plan to go to a library and read books.
6. Too much drinking last night foiled my plan to take my boys to the zoo, so they walked out of my room, disappointed. One way popped into my head. I took my boys out to get some ice cream. As they were having
icecreamesice creams and potato chips, big smiles spread across their faces.