- I went up
stairs to his class room and I found him running around in the hallway with the
rest of his classmates.
- He is not
disqualified as the leader of our gathering. Whenever
we get together I should just pull the plug on his stupid idea. We need
to change the leader to new one.
- I woke up
early in the morning and the first thing I did was to look out the window to
see if it snowed heavily. Luckily it didn’t. It meant I don’t need to
leave my place earlier than usual.
- Things did
get out of hand with D. He broke into my bag, took my smart phone out and
played games with it. When I got it from him it was dead.
- I locked
myself in my room so my boys were not going to come into my room. When they
open the door to my room screen for movies would be ripped because the screen
comes down from a ceiling right in front of the door.
- D got me
out of bed at 6:00 Sunday morning. My boys are supposed to play games on my
Ipad every weekend so he woke me up to do it pretty quickly.
Hi Polo!
These are the corrections of the following sentences:
- I went upstairs to his class room and I found him running around in the hallway with the rest of his classmates.
- He is not disqualified as the leader of our gathering. Whenever we get together, I should just pull the plug on his stupid idea. We need to change the leader to a new one.
- I woke up early in the morning and the first thing I did was to look out the window to see if it snowed heavily. Luckily it didn’t. It meant I don’t need to leave my place earlier than usual. correct
- Things did get out of hand with D. He broke into my bag, took my smart phone out, and played games with it. When I got it from him it was dead.
- I locked myself in my room so my boys were not going to come into my room. When they open the door,
tomy room screen for movies would be ripped because the screen comes down from a ceiling right in front of the door.- D got me out of bed at 6:00 Sunday morning. My boys are supposed to play games on my Ipad every weekend; so he woke me up to do it pretty quickly.