Unit 1-1: Turn Back Time
I always try to be satisfied with my life and I am doing well. However, If I have an ability to turn back time, I would go back to four years ago. At that time, I was in Canada to study English and I had many events to remember.
First event is my birthday party. That birthday party was held to celebrate my twenty-third birthday. I had beer and many delicious food with my friends. And also, I was able to get present from people who were invited to my birthday party.
When I was in there, I took a coach trip every weekend. I went to the Niagara Falls, Thousand Islands in Kingston, and New York. Near the Niagara Falls, there was casino that I could play Blackjack. I wanted to win but I lose 20 bucks in there. That is my first bad experience in casino.
I met many friends from other countries and learned a lot from them. It was quite tough in the beginning because of my poor english skill. But I studied hard and tried to keep good relationships with them. In the end, we can be a good friends. Through this experience, I was able to learn how to harmonize with people who has different backgrounds. I think living in abroad is like two sides of the same coin.
Because of that experience, I want to go back to four years ago. I hope to have that experience again.
Dear, Nelda.
I am very sorry for late. Talk you tomorrow and have a nice day. :)
Hi Kate! Here are the corrections for your composition:
I'll talk to you later.
However, If I have an ability to turn back time, I would go back to four years ago.
However, If I had an ability to turn back time, I would go back to four years ago.
First event is my birthday party.
The first event was my birthday party
I had beer and many delicious food with my friends.
I had beer and lots of delicious food with my friends.
When I was in there, I took a coach trip every weekend.
When I was there, I took a coach trip every weekend.
Near the Niagara Falls, there was casino that I could play Blackjack.
Near the Niagara Falls, there was a casino where I could play Blackjack.
I wanted to win but I lose 20 bucks in there.
I wanted to win but I lost 20 bucks.
That is my first bad experience in casino.
That was my first bad experience in casino.
In the end, we can be a good friends.
In the end, we became good friends.
I was able to learn how to harmonize with people who has different backgrounds
I was able to learn how to harmonize with people who have different backgrounds
I think living in abroad is like two sides of the same coin.
I think living abroad