Good morning, Nelda. This is Kate.
Here is my third assignment.
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Unit 1-2: A rainy day.
This picture makes me feel energetic and active. Even though it is raining, people are going to work. There is sunshine between two buildings. Because of that, I think rain will stop soon. This picture might be taken near Wall Street in New York. Because I can see some high buildings and they dressed up in suit. I can also see white thing on the road. I think the men who wear a black suit dropped it due to the fact that he carries white paper. When I saw this picture at first, the Korean old saying occurred to me. The saying is ‘The ground is getting harder after a rain.’ It means that ‘Whenever you are in trouble, don’t worry too much about that. The great happiness will come when you overcome the trouble.’
Hi Kate! Here are the corrections to your composition:
Even though it is raining, people are going to work.
Even though it is raining, people go to work.
Because of that, I think rain will stop soon.
Because of that, I think the rain will stop soon.
Because I can see some high buildings and they dressed up in suit.
I can see some high buildings and people are dressed up/people are wearing suit.
I think the men who wear a black suit dropped it
I think the man who wears a black suit dropped it
I think the man wearing a black suit dropped it
When I saw this picture at first, the Korean old saying occurred to me.
When I first saw this picture, I remembered the old Korean saying.
The great happiness will come when you overcome the trouble.
Great happiness will come when you overcome trouble.