For the soul of Korean young navy guys
The world without war
The world nobody point a gun any more
Just sleep with a peace
We will remember your dedication and efforts
We realize we can go to bed without anxiety, because of your sacrifices and dedications.
We hope all of yours go to heaven
We are not forget your precious sacrifices.
God bless you and your family.
For the Soul of Korean Young Navy Men
The world without war.
The world where nobody points a gun to no one.
Just to sleep with peace.
We will remember your dedication and efforts.
We realize that we can go to bed without anxiety because of your sacrifices and dedications.
We hope all of you to go to heaven.
We will not forget your precious sacrifices.
God bless you and your family.
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hey DK!
This is a kind of free verse.
It's good.
Maybe, it will be better if you will use various vocabularies.
Keep it up~!
Good night! ^^;;