Hi, Nelda. This is Kate.
Here is my 4th assignment.
Thank you and talk you soon. :)
Unit 1-2: Alone in the jungle.
There is a leopard in a dense forest. I think she got lost. She climbs a tree so that she is able to find right way to home. She suddenly thinks it isn’t easy to find her family. That is why she looks sad. Maybe she is waiting for Tarzan to help her.
This picture might be taken in the jungles of the Amazon that I want to have an adventure. So, I am envious of photographer’s success to go to the Amazon. This picture is very active and adventurous because the leopard seems to get ready to run. She will do her best to meet her family.
Hi Kate! Here are the corrections:
She climbs a tree so that she is able to find right way to home.
She climbs a tree so that she will be able to find her home right away.
This picture might be taken in the jungles of the Amazon that I want to have an adventure.
This picture might be taken in the jungles of the Amazon wherein I want to have an adventure.
So, I am envious of photographer’s success to go to the Amazon.
So, I am envious of the photographer’s success in going to the Amazon.
**This is a good composition because you were able to inject humor and I like it very much.