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Here is my fifth assignment.
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Unit 1-3: Now showing
I want to narrate about a movie ‘Alice in wonderland’. The genre of this movie is fantasy animation. This movie is blurring the line between live-action and animation. The director of this movie is Tim Burton. ‘Alice in wonderland’ is a recent movie of him. In this movie, there are four main characters including Alice, Mad Hatter, the White Queen and the Red Queen. Johnny Depp stars as the Mad Hatter who makes a hat for the Red Queen. Mia Wasikowaska is in a movie as Alice. Anne Hathaway who was in a movie ‘The Devil Wears Prada’ also stars as the White Queen. In this movie, Alice who is main character embarks on a fantastical journey to find her destiny and she wants to end the Red Queen’s reign of terror. This movie is a remake of the 1865 original novel ‘Alice’s adventure in wonderland’ which is Lewis Carroll’s beloved novel. The film differs a little bit from the original.
Hi Kate! Here are the corrections:
I want to narrate about a movie ‘Alice in wonderland’.
I want to narrate the movie, ‘Alice in wonderland’.
‘Alice in wonderland’ is a recent movie of him.
‘Alice in wonderland’ is a recent movie of his.
In this movie, there are four main characters including Alice, Mad Hatter, the White Queen and the Red Queen.
In this movie, there are four main characters -- Alice, Mad Hatter, the White Queen and the Red Queen.
Mia Wasikowaska is in a movie as Alice.
Mia Wasikowaska is/plays Alice.
This movie is a remake of the 1865 original novel ‘Alice’s adventure in wonderland’ which is Lewis Carroll’s beloved novel.
This is the movie version of Lewis Carroll's beloved 1865 novel ' Alice's adventure in wonderland'.