HI...Janet^^ Thanks for correcting my writings. These sentences are mentioned already at the last our class.
1. Money is one of the most important priorty in my life. Of course, happiness, health and
something invisible stuffs are superior to any other thing even the money.
2. I want to put the money first on the priority list just in case of practical life. Money will make
our life abundantly phisically and mentaly. Of couse there could be people satisfied with their life
with less money. However, it is definite that there are just a few.
3. Most of the people want to make more and more money as possible as they can than now,
becuase they think those who have more money can have more chances than others in life.
4. It sounds like very cruel but it is reality. Money can be the most poweful weapon in our life.
Money is important factor to enrich our life though, we should make sure that good humanity,
happiness and health must be based on our life first.
I am depressed for failing go to the 8th round, but we really well done.^^ See you soon~~
Hello June,
Just got your message, You did a good job today. I really like your writings. You did it almost perfect. Only one article is missing on your sentence. About the game last weekend its alright, don't be sad, you should be proud! See You Later...
4.It sounds like very cruel but it is the reality.