1st Assignment
Q.
If you could turn back time and experience again an event in your life, what would it be?
Would you go back to change what happened? Or would you want to re-experience it because it made you happy?
A.
If I could turn back time and experience again a specific event in my life, I will choose the moment when I was a young boy who went to kindergarten. That’s because the point of lives give me many chances to change my route of my life, and it was the most enjoyable period.
First of all, I will have spent time with plan for success of my dream since when I was young. In fact, I chose the major different from what I like to study when I entered university because I did not earn an enough score to get admission from the department. I think that if I could retain my memory to the young, I would be able to make it getting high score in the test.
In addition, I would like to experience happiness again when I was a child. At that time, I remember that I was truly pleased without any worries. In contrast, I cannot escape from a certain concerns in life, nowadays. Thus, I really want to go back to the moment.
For those reasons, I want to return when I was the young. Even though I know the fact that it is impossible to trace time, sometimes, I imagine that if I could turn back time. In spite that it remains just a day dream, it is worth to give me enjoyment which I can forget worries of reality.
Corrections:
If I could turn back time and experience again a specific event in my life, I will choose the moment when I was a young boy who went to kindergarten.
=> If I could turn back time and experience again a specific event in my life, I would choose the moment when I was a young boy who went to kindergarten.
(In hypothetical sentences, we use past tense forms of verbs)
That’s because the point of lives give me many chances to change my route of my life...
=> That's because it's the point when I had many chances to change the direction of my life...
First of all, I will have spent time with plan for success of my dream since when I was young.
=> First of all, I would spend my time planning for the success of my dreams.
In fact, I chose the major different from what I like to study when I entered university because I did not earn an enough score to get admission from the department.
=> In fact, I chose a major different from what I liked to study when I entered university because I did not earn enough score to be admitted to the department.
I think that if I could retain my memory to the young, I would be able to make it getting high score in the test.
=> I think that if I held on to my childhood dreams, I could have gotten a high score in the test.
For those reasons, I want to return when I was the young.
=> For those reasons, I want to return to the time when I was the young.
...sometimes, I imagine that if I could turn back time.
=>....sometimes, I imagine that I could turn back time.
In spite that it remains just a day dream, it is worth to give me enjoyment which I can forget worries of reality.
=> In spite of the fact that it remains just a daydream, it is worth enjoying because I can forget the worries of reality.