-      It's my script for presentaion. I'd like you to read it and give me advice
 
Opening part
-      Good afternoon, everyone.
-      My name is Yang Jiseon, I’m a technical consultant of Xener systems.
-      I am very glad to be here and meet you.
 
-      Today, I’m going to talk about IP Telephony Solution for the Enterprise Communication.
-      Enterprise communications environment has been changed over the years, from TDM based simple voice telephony to the integrated internet based environment.
-      These days, customers’ needs for various integrated IPT solution are rapidly growing. 
-      And With these solution, enterprise communications are getting more easy and convenient in many ways
-       
-      So. Through this time I’d like to introduce comprehensive enterprise IPT Solution of Xener systems.
-       
-      We have a lot to cover in this time, so, I’d be glad if U’d hold your questions until the end of my talk.
-      Then, let’s start my presentation.
 
P3_ Xener IP Telephony
-      First, I’ll introduce Xener IPT briefly and study Xener IPT’s strong points in detail 
 
P4_ Xener IP Telephony
-      Xener IP Telephony Solution doesn’t mean just one product like IP-PBX.
-      It means comprehensive IPT & UC & FMC solution for company to improve company’s efficiency and profitability
 
P5_ Highlights of Xener IPT
-      Xener IPT is Pure IP-based solution.
-      Nowadays, Some PBX vendors offer the VoIP service by just mounting IP board in existing Legacy PBX, we call it hybrid PBX.
-      With hybrid PBX, There is a limit to the scalability and interoperability
-      Xener IP PBX is not hybrid PBX, Pure IP-based solution.
-       
-      It’s 100% Xener In-house technology-based solution.
-       
-      Xener can provide total solution for enterprise VoIP market, from IP-PBX ,IP Phone, UC,  to FMC 
-      We have diverse product lines according to capacity to meet various customers’ needs from small sized company to big sized company. 
 
-      We have a lot of experience of deploying IPT solution in many different environment
-      Since 2004, more than 200 projects completed
-       
-      Let's look at the next slide, to study Xener IPT’s strong points in detail.
 
P6_ Strong Points “Stable interoperability”
-      Xener IP-PBX had passed all Benchmark test(BMT) of Korean telco carriers successfully,
-      We can say with confidence, stability and interoperability with telecom carrier network have been verified through BMT.
 
P7_ Strong Points “Diverse product lines”
-      As I said at the previous page, we have diverse product lines according to customers’ sizes and needs.
-       
-      Xener IPT solution can be roughly categorized into two product lines, Bizcom line and XIP G3 line.
-       
-      Bizcom is the solution for small & medium enterprises wanting only must have function with reasonable price, It can support up to 300 subscribers 
-       
-      XIP G3 is comprehensive IPT & UC solution for enterprises wanting sophisticated functions. With this one box server can support maximum 40 thousands subscribers.
-             .
-      I’ll prepare detail explanation of XIP G3 and Bizcom in next part.
-       
P8_Strong Points “Service integration”
 
-      Other IPT vendor just allows its own products and applications to be connected.
-      But, Xener IPT solution allow external 3rd application & products to be connected freely.
-      Because we comply with standard SIP and provides Open AIP for interworking with various 3rd party systems.
-      So Xener provides total IP solution, diverse Value added service & UC & FMC Service with Xener’s integration capability.
-       
P9_Strong Points “IOT Capability” 
-      Xener IPT solutions comply with standards and use SIP, internet telephony standard protocol, not our own private protocol.
-      It’ good for cost reducing 
-      If you introduced Cisco's IP-PBX, you have to buy the IP phones only made by cisco. 
-      Even though other vendors release lower-cost IP phone, you cannot use it.
-      But, almost every IP phones can interconnect with xener IP PBX, if the phone just use SIP. 
-      We already Successfully passed Interoperability Test with 15 vendors(more than 36 IP phones), and we keep expanding.
 
P10_Strong Points “Price Competitiveness” 
-      And Next, strong point is a competitive price.
-      Compared to our competitors, Xener IPT solution have competitive price.
-      This picture shows that Under the same conditions, when compared to Cisco(One of major competitors), the price of Xener IPT is about 40% cheaper than Cisco’s.
 
P11_Strong Points “Experience”
 
-      The last strong point is Our extensive experience
-      This slide displays the list of out reference sites.
-      From 2004, We supplied and installed IPT solution to many companies, schools, and governments.
-      National Pension Corp. we completed in 2007 is the major reference site.
-      IT has Over 100 branches nationwide it’ The largest IP-PBX project in Korea
-      And Last year, We completed IPT & FMC solution at Seoul Metropolitan Rapid Transit Corporation, it has about 7000 users.
-      Our extensive experience enables us to successfully handle and complete various IPT projects that other competitors can’t.
-       
P11_Strong Points “Experience”
-      This slide shows IP-PBX Market share in Korea 
 
                 
                
                            
Hi Heyden! Here are the corrections I did. There are only a few. I used the red font for the things that I changed and I highlighted the parts where I got confused. Maybe you can clarify it later in the class. I'll talk to you later. Have a great day!
Opening part
- Good afternoon, everyone.
- My name is Yang Jiseon, I’m a technical consultant of Xener systems.
- I am very glad to be here and meet you.
- Today, I’m going to talk about IP Telephony Solution for the Enterprise Communication.
- Enterprise communications environment has been changed over the years, from TDM based simple voice telephony to the integrated internet based environment.
- These days, the customers’ needs for various integrated IPT solution are rapidly growing.
- And With these solutions, enterprise communications are getting easier and convenient in many ways
-  
- So. Through this time I’d like to introduce comprehensive enterprise IPT Solution of Xener systems.
-  
- We have a lot to cover today so, I’d be glad if U’d hold your questions until the end of my talk.
- Then, let’s start my presentation.
P3_ Xener IP Telephony
- First, I’ll introduce Xener IPT briefly and study Xener IPT’s strong points in detail
P4_ Xener IP Telephony
- Xener IP Telephony Solution doesn’t mean just one product like IP-PBX.
- It means comprehensive IPT & UC & FMC solution for company to improve company’s efficiency and profitability
P5_ Highlights of Xener IPT
- Xener IPT is Pure IP-based solution.
- Nowadays, Some PBX vendors offer the VoIP service by just mounting IP board in existing Legacy PBX, we call it hybrid PBX.
- With hybrid PBX, There is a limit to the scalability and interoperability
- Xener IP PBX is not hybrid PBX, Pure IP-based solution.
-  
- It’s 100% Xener In-house technology-based solution.
-  
- Xener can provide total solution for enterprise VoIP market, from IP-PBX ,IP Phone, UC, to FMC
- We have diverse product lines according to capacity to meet various customers’ needs from small sized company to big sized company.
- We have a lot of experience of deploying IPT solution in many different environment
- Since 2004, more than 200 projects have been completed
-  
- Let's look at the next slide, to study Xener IPT’s strong points in detail.
P6_ Strong Points “Stable interoperability”
- Xener IP-PBX had passed all Benchmark test(BMT) of Korean telco carriers successfully,
- We can say with confidence, stability and interoperability with telecom carrier network have been verified through BMT.
P7_ Strong Points “Diverse product lines”
- As I said at the previous page, we have diverse product lines according to customers’ sizes and needs.
-  
- Xener IPT solution can be roughly categorized into two product lines, Bizcom line and XIP G3 line.
-  
- Bizcom is the solution for small & medium enterprises that only want a function with reasonable price, It can support up to 300 subscribers
-  
- XIP G3 is comprehensive IPT & UC solution for enterprises that want sophisticated functions. With this one box server, it can support a maximum of 40 thousands subscribers.
- .
- I’ll prepare a detailed explanation of XIP G3 and Bizcom in next part.
-  
P8_Strong Points “Service integration”
- Other IPT vendor just allows its own products and applications to be connected.
- But, Xener IPT solution allow external 3rd application & products to be connected freely.
- Because we comply with standard SIP and provides Open AIP for interworking with various 3rd party systems.
- So Xener provides total IP solution, diverse Value added service & UC & FMC Service with Xener’s integration capability.
-  
P9_Strong Points “IOT Capability”
- Xener IPT solutions comply with standards and use SIP, internet telephony standard protocol, not our own private protocol.
- It’ good for cost cutting/reduction
- If you introduced Cisco's IP-PBX, you have to buy the IP phones only made by cisco.
- Even though other vendors release lower-cost IP phone, you cannot use it.
- But, almost every IP phones can interconnect with xener IP PBX, if the phone just use SIP.
- We already successfully passed Interoperability Test with 15 vendors(more than 36 IP phones), and we keep expanding.
P10_Strong Points “Price Competitiveness”
- And Next, strong point is a competitive price.
- Compared to our competitors, Xener IPT solution have competitive price.
- This picture shows that Under the same conditions, when compared to Cisco(One of major competitors), the price of Xener IPT is about 40% cheaper than Cisco’s.
P11_Strong Points “Experience”
- The last strong point is Our extensive experience
- This slide displays the list of out reference sites.
- From 2004, We supplied and installed IPT solution to many companies, schools, and governments.
- National Pension Corp. we completed in 2007 is the major reference site.
- IT has Over 100 branches nationwide it’ The largest IP-PBX project in Korea
- And last year, We completed IPT & FMC solution at Seoul Metropolitan Rapid Transit Corporation, it has about 7000 users.
- Our extensive experience enables us to successfully handle and complete various IPT projects that other competitors can’t.
-  
P11_Strong Points “Experience”
- This slide shows IP-PBX Market share in Korea