42. The happiest moment in my life can be everyday and every moment because it happens from my mind. For example, when I just look upon the sky accidently on my way home after work, I found a beautiful sunset scene across the office building. Finding beauty in everyday life can be a great joy. I usually take a picture on those moments or write a journal with some rough drawings. These records of daily life make the happiest moment happen. The happiest moment can be made when we feel that moment fullest.
I think about the topic again and rewrite it. Marci, you always give me another new perspectives and it helps me develop my English skills and also affects my life and thinking as well. That's why I feel very optimistic every morning after our phone call. Thanks.
Lynn
42. The happiest moment in my life happens everyday or any moment because it comes from my mind. For example, when I just accidentally look up the sky on my way home after work, I found a beautiful sunset scene across the office building.
Finding beauty in everyday life can be a great joy. I usually take a picture of those moments or write a journal with some rough drawings. These records of daily life make the happiest moment possible. The happiest moment can be made when we feel that moment to the fullest.
Hello Lynn,
What's written above is the edited version of your paragraph. I want to you to express yourself and it's important that you express it deliberately. I'm happy that you appreciate what I tell and shared with you in class. If you are learning from me, I too am learning from you. Continue being optimistic because it'll give you a light feeling. Take care and see you in class.
Marci
(Marci and Lynn- Marcilyn is my complete name^__^)