how was your day??^^
i had an seminar at a learned society that study economy.
we are going to have a forum on saturday~
students of 8 korea and japan university such as seoul univ and tokoy univ attend that forum~!
our group announce about smart phone. topic is bandwagon effect.
we investigated relationship with user and application developer and applicatio and deductioned demand curve.
frankly, i cannot understand our conlusion perfectly....ㅠㅠ
but i believe my friends who have a smart brain.
that forum will be on yonsei university so i go to the sin chon after a long time.
i am exited and worried about meeting a new person.
thank you for checking my english sentence^^
hi jang myung~
You're always welcome. ^^
Please practice using the proper punctuation marks and the capitalization of the letters in writing your sentences.
Those things are important too so please give enough attention to them.
Be careful in using articles such as 'the', 'a' and 'an'. Kindly review your notes regarding their usage.
I hope you will enjoy the forum. I know that you're a smart cookie too. ^^;;
expression:
smart cookie - smart person
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corrections:
I had a seminar from an academic society that studies Economics.
We are going to have a forum on Saturday.
Korean and Japanese students from eight universities such as Seoul National University and Tokyo University will attend that forum.
Our group will discuss the topic about smart phone and the bandwagon effect.
We investigated the relationship between the user and the application developer and between the application and the deduction demand curve.
Frankly, I couldn't understand our conclusion perfectly.
However, I believe that my friends have a smart brain.
That forum will be in Yonsei University so I will go to Shin Chon again after a long time.
I am excited and worried at the same time about meeting a new person.
Thank you for checking my new sentences.