Question from my friend, please help !

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2009.08.06 01:06:26 (*.35.110.216)

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ei please check this sentence

one of my friends asked me if this was right

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I'm sending this to make make sure if you received my contract and deposit successfully.

If you got it right, please tell me where I'll stay and whether I'll have roommates.

I'll wait for your answer. Thank you.

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2009.08.06 01:16:21 (*.53.195.103)

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please check these sentences: one of my friends asked me if these were right....

1. I'm sending this to make sure that you received the contract and the deposit successfully.

2. If you got it right, please tell me where I'll stay and whether I'll have some roommates.

3. right sentence

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