Some people say that the most important thing when they choose their job is money. But I don’t agree this statement. Money can’t make people’s life happily. And job just for money can’t cause positive effect on job.
First, money can’t make people happily. Money is just a necessary condition, not a sufficient condition of happy. According to a research of sociology institute studied a correlation between money and happy, people can live happily as an adequate amount of money. Concretely, money that enable eat food, wear clothes and get house to live give them thought they are happy. And the research also said excessive money that people can’t control doesn’t affect their happy. It can’t give them any satisfaction about money anymore because they already have enough money. In last month, I read an article about analyzing job satisfaction. As I remembered, the top was photographer and second was writer, third was pilot and fourth was composer. As you know, these jobs never can make huge money. Isn't it Irony? So, I think money is not a decisive reason when I choose my job. So, what is the most important thing when I choose my job? I think satisfaction on job is more important than how much do I earn.
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I didn't know there is a word limitation..
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hey bona!
You wrote well in this topic. But you must distinguish when to use a noun or a verb in your sentence.
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Some people say that the most important thing to consider in choosing a job is money. But I don’t agree to this statement. Money alone can’t make people’s life happy. Moreover, working just for money won’t cause any positive effect on the job.
First, money can’t make people completely happy. Money is just a necessary condition but not a sufficient condition for happiness. According to a research of sociology institute who studied about the correlation between money and happiness, people can live happily given an adequate amount of money. Concretely, money that enables them to eat food, to wear clothes and to live in a house give them the thought of happiness. The research also said that excessive money that people can’t control doesn’t affect their happiness either. It can’t give them any satisfaction anymore because they already had enough.
Last month, I read an article about analyzing job satisfaction. As I remember, the top job which could give the highest satisfaction was being a photographer, second was being a writer, third was being a pilot and the fourth was being a composer. As you know, these jobs can never make huge money. Isn't it ironic? So, I think that money is not a decisive reason in choosing my job. Then, what is the most important thing to consider in choosing a job? I think satisfaction on the job is most important thing to consider.