<Question: If you go on any time of adventure, what would it be? How far could you go?>
The word “adventure” itself makes people feel trilling with excitement. Everyone finds a break from daily routine lives. Adventure can be one of the methods to relieve our stress from those lives. It implies numerous activities from a simple hobby to a magnificent one which might be seen on documentary show.
If I had a chance to go wherever I want to go, I will go to Mars. This is because, I have always thought about the mystery of space and been curious what is made of space and how it circulates. If I can watch all meteors, planets, or other living creatures in person, I will record and write them in details for the research which can provide descendants for potential shelters after exploding the Earth. Specifically there exists a hypothetic theory that living condition in Mars is so similar to that of Earth that human can survive. I wish I went to go there someday and explore Mars in case of emergent situation.
The adventure that I mentioned above does not make sense to some extent. However, it might become true in the future with more advanced technology.
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I enjoyed reading your entry. It's not something usual though but as I was reading it, I found myself imagining the things that you said. Funny right? kk~ Way to go! Keep on writing! ^^
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If you could go on any type of adventure, what would it be?
How far could you go?
The word “adventure” itself makes people feel thrilling with excitement. Everyone finds a break from a daily routine life. Having an adventure can be one of the ways to relieve our stress from this kind of life. It includes numerous activities from a simple hobby to a magnificent one which may be seen on a documentary show.
If I had a chance to go wherever I want to, I will go to Mars. This is because I have always thought about the mystery of space and have been curious of what is space made of. (and how it circulates.) I’m sorry but I don’t know exactly what you meant by ‘circulates’ so I removed it. If I could watch all the meteors, planets and other living creatures in person, I will record and write them in details. These future researches can provide our descendants a potential shelter if the Earth would explode. Specifically, there exists a hypothetical theory that the living condition in Mars is so similar to that of the Earth in which human can survive. I wish I could go there someday and explore Mars in case of an emergent situation.
The adventure that I mentioned above does not make sense to some extent. However, it may come true in the future with more advanced technology.
1. Check the spelling of some words.
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3. Divide long sentences into shorter ones.
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