conclusion - I had an science experiment and I got some conclusions.
impacts - A car impacted into the front car.
analyze - After I got my test score, I analyze it.
resulted in - Her bad habit resulted in big problem.
demand - Employees demand more money to their employers.
rates - The birth rates are decreasing.
simple - I bought a simple note.
combat - I try not to combat with Jinny.
overlook - I had overlooked infromations about Teps before I took Teps test.
consider - I considered what to buy between two pencil cases.
hi lina!
Thanks for doing your homework. You did really good! I made some corrections though. Please check them. Keep it up!
Happy holiday!!! ^^
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corrections:
conclusion - I did a Science experiment and I made some conclusions.
impacts - A car impacted the car in front of it. (However in this sentence, the word 'impact' was used as a verb not as a noun. It's not the meaning that we studied in the module. In the module, we studied "impact" as noun which means "effect".)
analyze - After I got my test score, I analyzed it.
resulted in - Her bad habit resulted in a big problem.
demand - Employees demand higher salary from their employers. (haha, really?)
rates - The birth rate is decreasing.
simple - I bought a simple note. (The construction is correct but the meaning of note in this sentence is not so clear. What does 'note' exactly mean?)
combat - I try not to combat with Jinny. (are you sure? kkk kidding.. You can also use combat in this way, 'The program aims to combat against war/disease.)
overlook - I overlooked some infromation about Teps before I took the test.
consider - I considered which one to buy between the two pencil cases.