1. People should take time
to relax with hobbies or physical activities that are very different from what
they do at work.
As many people are deciding
their hobbies to relax themselves, hobbies are standing for reshaping and
refreshing them from their work; thus, it is easy to say that it should not
have any relationship with their working position. Yet, in my opinion, it is
not true in that it does not consider following reasons.
First, hobbies do not have
any pressure that came from the result. In other words, if you are working in
the workplaces, you might have to make a good result; however, it is not
necessary to hobbies. Likewise, you can enjoy yourself even though you are
doing same kinds of work because there are no pressures. In the light of that,
it is not hard to find a person who has same hobbies like his or her expertise.
Second, learning different
activities takes a lot of time than doing same kinds of work. If you decided to
learn new hobbies, it would take much more time and energy than doing familiar
things. That means, you would not have peaceful time and relaxing because of
learning unfamiliar things. Plus, according to the scientists, people who in
the new situation are five-times more likely to have stresses than people who doing
ordinary works.
In summary, I believe taking
new hobbies does not need to select exceptionally new one. Rather, taking familiar
one would guarantee better performance and less stresses. Not to mention that it
is totally different kinds of work from that of burdensome.
Hi Kang!
I didn't write the correction here yet.Let's talk about your composition in class and I will just correct it in our time.
See you :)