This time, I am writing the composition to ask my thankful heart.
For several months, I have learned from Merci from Ohmyenglish. At the first time I met her, I felt that she has a truly strong character because her voice was too sticky and very limited accent, which has not been changed, but I am very familiar with that voice now. J Sometime, she looks like in a hardship and when I asked her are you okay? Then she answered that I have to be okay. I cannot figure out why she answered like that but just assumed that she did her best in her situation
Every time I wrote the composition, she revised it and gave some valuable advises. It helps a lot to my skills for the composition.
Thank you.
Kang
This time, I am writing the composition to ask my thankful heart.
[This time, I am writing a composition of my thankful heart.]
For several months, I have learned from Merci from Ohmyenglish.
[For several months, I have learned from Marci in Ohmyenglish.]
At the first time I met her, I felt that she has a truly strong character because hervoice was too sticky and very limited accent, which has not been changed, but I am very familiar with that voice now.
[The first time I met her, I felt that she had a truly strong character because her voice was too strict and very limited accent, which has not been changed. But I am very familiar with that voice now. ]
I Sometime, she looks like in ahardship and when I asked her are you okay?
[Sometimes, she seems like having a hard time when I asked her if she’s okay.]
Then she answered that I have to be okay. I cannot figure out why she answered like that but justassumed that she did her best in her situation
[Then she answered that she had to be okay. I couldn’t figure out why she answered like that but just assumed that she did her best in her situation.]
Every time I wrote the composition, she revised it and gave some valuable advises. It helps a lot to my skills for the composition.
[Every time I wrote a composition, she revised it and gave some valuable advises. It helps me a lot with my skills in composition.]
Thank you.
Kang