Dear teacher.
thank you for Learning english happily
this is my business situation
i tried english transition for business today.
Could you correct this sentenses please?
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(1)Regarding CA-(N) series, They perform Very good Adhesion & Reliability. However cutting problem has comes up in this products since the polymer density is low.
(2) CA-(H) Series, upgrade version of CA series are developed by polymer density & adhesion strength. They perform cutting excellence, that is a good advantage.
(3) CA-(S) Series, upgrade version of CA-(N) series are developed by polymer density & adhesion strength more than CA-(H). They perform auto-clave process excellence, that is a good advantage too.
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(2) CA-(H) series, upgraded versions of CA series are developed by polymer density & adhesion strength. They perform cutting excellence, twhich is a good advantage.
(3) CA-(S) series, upgraded versions of CA-(N) series are developed by polymer density & adhesion strength. This is better than CA-(H). They perform auto-clave process excellence, which is a good advantage too.
I hope this is want you actually mean.