Thank you for submitting your homework. I'm sorry for giving the corrections late.
I really appreciate you for writing this essay. However, I think we should review more what descriptive essay is.
In the corrections, I didn't include the second paragraph because it's not descriptive. That is more on giving instructions. This topic will be tackled too in the following lessons.
I want to suggest this site to you. This will give you simple and practical ways on how to write a descriptive essay. Please check it.
This picture shows a typical
Korean meal. This meal is composed of rice, soup, and other several side dishes
which are commonly served on Korean tables. On the center of the table lies a
cake as the centerpiece. The cake is covered with white icing and topped with
various fruits and cream. The cake plus the colorful dishes gives a warm
atmosphere. The drinks are placed on the front right side of the table. The
spoons and forks are arranged neatly and orderly on the table ready for use.
Hi Yoomie!
Thank you for submitting your homework. I'm sorry for giving the corrections late.
I really appreciate you for writing this essay. However, I think we should review more what descriptive essay is.
In the corrections, I didn't include the second paragraph because it's not descriptive. That is more on giving instructions. This topic will be tackled too in the following lessons.
I want to suggest this site to you. This will give you simple and practical ways on how to write a descriptive essay. Please check it.
http://www.wikihow.com/Write-a-Descriptive-Essay
Thank you! Have a blessed day!
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corrections:
This picture shows a typical Korean meal. This meal is composed of rice, soup, and other several side dishes which are commonly served on Korean tables. On the center of the table lies a cake as the centerpiece. The cake is covered with white icing and topped with various fruits and cream. The cake plus the colorful dishes gives a warm atmosphere. The drinks are placed on the front right side of the table. The spoons and forks are arranged neatly and orderly on the table ready for use.